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Sad
Loved a girl
Who lived upon Serenity Hill
Dressed in angel-white
Sometimes she stood very still
Waiting for the wind's will
And then, with amazing grace
She flew over mountains, rivers, clouds
Always... above and so far... from him
Sad
Wondered often
Why she was so bright and soft
If only... one time... for one day
Those closed gates opened
Like he's bleeding heart long forgotten
Mourning in anger he went
Darker and darker; the longest night he became
Never knowing that her name... was Glad
*K
MARCH
*Y
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Loved a girl
Who lived upon Serenity Hill
Dressed in angel-white
Sometimes she stood very still
Waiting for the wind's will
And then, with amazing grace
She flew over mountains, rivers, clouds
Always... above and so far... from him
Sad
Wondered often
Why she was so bright and soft
If only... one time... for one day
Those closed gates opened
Like he's bleeding heart long forgotten
Mourning in anger he went
Darker and darker; the longest night he became
Never knowing that her name... was Glad
*K
MARCH
*Y
© copyright of KAY MARCH - All Rights Reserved.
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Your theme/concept is good, and the emotional pull is there. However, the grammar is flawed and hurts the piece. Don't be afraid to revisit and edit. Keep writing, friend. This shows real promise! 