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Along with shame, the shadows came
the shadows along, as the witch proud shroud
of the primeval new moon
fading the fresh roses of June
stealing blue passions their tune

Duelling ghosts of Heaven and Hell keep calling
the resentment of the Furies summoning
changing everything
as the light of day, slowly runs away
I will not play anymore nor will I pray for more

Scarlet skies bleed into rain
I crawl, feeling their cries and pain
in the obsidian amethyst night
where oracle flowers, grows
giving birth to majestic crows

Dream castles fall down, crashes
dust wind and ashes
remains of old stones, dazzling white bones
glittering marbles against the dark
haze veils paint the dew in black

Secretly closed, tomb and ark
I will guard such treasures inside
hiding from human sight
as I become a shadow too
unfolding the dying roses and holding you


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MARCH
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:iconmontalto69:
Montalto69 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Professional General Artist
O them dueling ghosts!
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
It's a good haunting!! Thank you for your comment and appreciation.
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ArthurCrow Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Very well written... good descriptions and you weaved a captivating mood.
Loved your word choices and smooth flow! :)
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
Thank you truely and kindly for your appreciation and comment, I'm touched by your own words regarding this piece!
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:iconarthurcrow:
ArthurCrow Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Hey you're very welcome, was my pleasure to read :)
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
:D The pleasure is mutual!
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Kiddo0526 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is gorgeous! I absolutely love the emotion this gives off. :]
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Thank you, kindly, please feel free to visit my gallery, seat for a while and read some more. You're most welcome!
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Kiddo0526 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome! :tighthug:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
All the same for you!
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i-am-a-retro-lass Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love it also. xx
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
Thank you kindly, please do feel free to visite my gallery and read some more if you like. It will be a pleasure talking with you!
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JokerrLaughs Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so dark and wonderful
i like
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
Thank you for reading and comment, sometimes
we all slide into the the dark, it's not a bad thing if we measure it wisely. I like it
also. :D
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
A beautiful nocturnal poem with a dark gothic feel to it. May the dying rosees always blossom anew in you. :blackrose:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
Thank you, dear... it's a bit dark gothic dark, indeed! No worries the roses will blossom again! :iconredroseplz:
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:iconnocturnejewel:
NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
I love black roses too. :blackrose: Black gothic roses. :iconloveblackplz:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
Me too... I do love gothic poetry and art also.
:iconblackrose-1::iconblackrose-2::iconblackrose-6::iconblackrose-7x:
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
I love those black roses! Thank-you!
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
they have them in lots of colours, just take a pick anc choose. Do you fancy black tulips as well? :iconblacktulipplz: I love this one.
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
My favorite is this black rose...
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
The nice thing on these rose ithems is that we can play endelessly with them, just by altering their disposition.
I love the white ones also... can't really say wich one I love the most.
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Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Professional Writer
very, very beautiful my friend :) :heart:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
Thank you, dear poet friend. Your comment is truely and deeply appreciated.:heart::D
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful :clap: I especially like the rhyme :love: Mostly the double rhyme at some verses :) Very powerful my friend :hug:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
Thank you, thank you and thank you... I'm letting all go as you told me!!
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That is amazing :)
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
hehe!! :hug:
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MeFlyingFree Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
Kay, this is wonderful!!
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
Thank you Holly, it's very special and dear,
a bit gloomy perhaps, but a dear feeling.
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MeFlyingFree Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
It's lovely. You're welcome:hug:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
:iconthankyouplz:
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MeFlyingFree Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
:D
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
:iconrainbowsqueeplz:
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MeFlyingFree Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
:D
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scribblingnooly Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Professional
Beautiful words, I love the rhymes and flow, lines such as "I will not play anymore nor will I pray for more" :-) The final stanza is so full of deep feeling. Wonderful poem.
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
Thank you... I sort of like the beginning and the end more than anything else.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
An amazing poem! I think of the old gods of heathen times turning over the world to mankind. Just like some of the legends. I know this interpretation is probably not your intent but I just go by the images you presented. I have to fave your poem. :)
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
Thank you! And I like your interpretation also, it wasn't my intention as a whole but it's there between the cracks, what you're saying also.
It's about my own emotions falling apart in the middle of Chaos, I suppose.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
You and I are the same then I've been going through so much lately.
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
It's about enduring life as it it. I have found that writing helps to get feelings in balance or in order (sometimes at least) I hope you feel the same.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
In a way I do. Right now, no amount of writing can help me but I endure. I have to.
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
I understand, pain can be overwhelming sometimes. If you need to talk send me a note and I reply soon as I can. It's more private. Stay well and safe!
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
thanks
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
you're welcome! :iconvalentineplz:
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