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Hemlocks scattered by the wind's hand
holds the winter, far away in a land
somewhere, lost in time, lost for time
...where is still cold… forever
where the distant glitter calls the white snow
to be his fair bride, being together

Old stones and poisoned weeds,
walls of entwined trees
beholds in captivity such beauty, but
Whom is the guardian?
Whom is the prisoner?
Love enjoys its Shakespearian plays and ways

A web of diamond dew freezes, weaves little crystals,
that both of them wear instead of skin, gentle veils
hiding their names in layers of lazy weather
brighter, lighter as an angel feather
dancing between sky, land and sea
everything that breaths up North is white

Untamed golden nightingales tune their tales
forgotten by the evening stars
they sing... words unspoken
by any other creature like myself
pale pilgrim that seek the moon in the dark night
with no voice to scream... just cry and cry...


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MARCH
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English Version of My Poem "O Nome dos Amantes"

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SilverCamelia9 Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is agonizing to read, and, for that, I am truly sorry.
First stanza had me rattled to read none of this.
True, I am very picky.
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:iconkay-march:
I understand if you don't like it. One should
only read things for pleasure. Reading your comment is like I was forcing to read a terrible thing. I for instances could never make such a comment to anyone, but that's me.
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SilverCamelia9 Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with what you're saying, in turn, I am a hypocrite. But, don't you see? I classify my comment to your piece as a comment you should look forward to; to see if something is wrong, that's what I want my readers to spot- the good, and the bad. You are a wonderful writer, it's just this poem I didn't like. And I thought you might want to know why I didn't like it...
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MeFlyingFree Nov 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
Kay, you make music with out the instruments. This is lovely:aww:
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:iconkay-march:
Wow... that's a pleasure to hear, I always write with music in my heart, so your comment
means the world to me. Thank you sweetie!!
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MeFlyingFree Nov 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
You are very welcome Kay :aww:
I may not always comment, but your writing always
makes me feel. Thank you. :hug:
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:iconkay-march:
Don't worry about it, I know you do. Thank you!:hug:
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MeFlyingFree Nov 14, 2012  Professional General Artist
:aww:
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:iconkay-march:
Thank you, dear friend! So glad you enjoy it.
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