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Hemlocks scattered by the wind's hand
holds the winter, far away in a land
somewhere, lost in time, lost for time
...where is still cold… forever
where the distant glitter calls the white snow
to be his fair bride, being together

Old stones and poisoned weeds,
walls of entwined trees
beholds in captivity such beauty, but
Whom is the guardian?
Whom is the prisoner?
Love enjoys its Shakespearian plays and ways

A web of diamond dew freezes, weaves little crystals,
that both of them wear instead of skin, gentle veils
hiding their names in layers of lazy weather
brighter, lighter as an angel feather
dancing between sky, land and sea
everything that breaths up North is white

Untamed golden nightingales tune their tales
forgotten by the evening stars
they sing... words unspoken
by any other creature like myself
pale pilgrim that seek the moon in the dark night
with no voice to scream... just cry and cry...


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SilverCamelia9 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is agonizing to read, and, for that, I am truly sorry.
First stanza had me rattled to read none of this.
True, I am very picky.
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
I understand if you don't like it. One should
only read things for pleasure. Reading your comment is like I was forcing to read a terrible thing. I for instances could never make such a comment to anyone, but that's me.
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SilverCamelia9 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with what you're saying, in turn, I am a hypocrite. But, don't you see? I classify my comment to your piece as a comment you should look forward to; to see if something is wrong, that's what I want my readers to spot- the good, and the bad. You are a wonderful writer, it's just this poem I didn't like. And I thought you might want to know why I didn't like it...
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MeFlyingFree Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
Kay, you make music with out the instruments. This is lovely:aww:
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Wow... that's a pleasure to hear, I always write with music in my heart, so your comment
means the world to me. Thank you sweetie!!
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MeFlyingFree Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
You are very welcome Kay :aww:
I may not always comment, but your writing always
makes me feel. Thank you. :hug:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Don't worry about it, I know you do. Thank you!:hug:
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MeFlyingFree Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Professional General Artist
:aww:
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chryssalis Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Wonderful!!:clap:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Thank you, dear friend! So glad you enjoy it.
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Lovely imagery of Winter you weaved, making silk from Yesterday's residue.
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
When I am waiting for one of your Jewel(s) that you carve so beautifuly... in the name of Winter. Thank you Jewel!
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
You're very welcome, and may the upcoming Winter fill you with inspiration. :iconsnowflakesplz:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
Thank you and I wish you back all the same!:D
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Aireansa Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
As always powerful words. I love your work hun. :hug:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Thank you sweetie, I'm glad that you do!:hug:
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Aireansa Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
=) :hug:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
For all the wish wells and hugs :iconteddyplz:
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Aireansa Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
=)
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Henakuo Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like this poem a lot. There's so much delicacy to the details. Easily a painting of words.
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Thank you dearly for your nice comment.
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Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Professional Writer
There is a beautiful dreamscape within your soul dear bard... :) :heart:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Wow... I am a bard too... Thank you dear friend!!
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Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Professional Writer
You certainly are! :D
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Hehe!! Thank you kindly!!:D
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scribblingnooly Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Professional
hiding their names in layers of lazy weather
brighter, lighter as an angel feather

Brings back memories of "Wait" for me. Such evocative lines and thoughts in this poem; "Untamed golden nightingales tune their tales/forgotten by the evening stars" is just sublime. "Love enjoys its Shakespearian plays and ways" is enchanting and so full of deep layers of thought and feeling. Gorgeous poem.
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Yes... it brings back memories of other poems
like I've said in a recent comment with you. I'm always playing around with the myths I have created for myself, they have strings lingering all of them, a sequence - like a tale in a book.
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Professional Writer
One of my favorites from you Kay... :hug:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Thank you dear Dragon by your always keen attention.:hug:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Professional Writer
:iconpiplupflyplz::iconwelcome1plz::iconwelcome2plz::iconwelcome3plz::iconwelcome4plz:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Such a lovely birdy :iconpiplupflyplz:
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
Really so skillfully written! I want to say it's a seasonal winter poem but there's much beneath the surface... Wonderfully crafted - as always. :heart:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Thank you dear friend, I like this piece very much.
You have a keen sense, there is more to it than meets the eye, just like you say. :hug:
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
:hug: I read it three times and everytime I do, there's more that I discern. I love poetry like that.
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
That is indeed wonderful, it's the kind of poetry I like too and hope to be able to write. :iconsnowflakeplz:
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
You always do so well. :)
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Thank you dear, it makes want to write more and better.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
:rose:
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