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Our discussions ended
always, it seemed
with the 3am train
and the stubborn, falling rain
burying, appeasing, diluting
almost all of our pain
slashing our life noises
being extinguished...
defying our bitter screams to quietness
deafened by rumors of anger growing
crawling over the corners, walls and floor
closing each door
tearing us apart,
reaping our minds and heart
these dark moths resting
where we once were
and love is breaking away
running away
from us day by day
on the ghostly hangar
of the 3am train
there is no more blessed rain
only pain...


*K
MARCH
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Noisy Neighbours, always wakes me up at 3am as a f*** train...
Please let me sleep!!

English Version of My Poem "O Comboio das 3 da Madrugada"

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=DragonsChest Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Wow, this is full of raw emotion and bitter frustration for sure...
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:iconkay-march:
You can't imagine how right you are!! Thank you deeply for your words!
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=DragonsChest Mar 23, 2013  Professional Writer
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:iconkay-march:
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Wonderful! Only a true poet can take a subject like this and create something of beauty :)
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:iconkay-march:
Thank you dear Gary... if only my feelings towards them were beautiful as well, sometimes I wish to have a big broom and sweep them off.
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
You are so sweet and gentle dear poet, I would use an electric cattle prod!!!!!
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:iconkay-march:
Hehe!! That could work!! :heart:
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Mood: Love *GUDRUN355 Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's excellent verse as always. What a skillful way to write about noisey neighbors!
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:iconkay-march:
They don't deserve such trouble and beauty, really. Thank you, dear it turned out quiet a beautiful poem despite all.
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